Marvel Fantastic Four TryOut Cover Page

Another Script I'm using from Glass house. I believe this set of sequential pages is better than the last one. Let me know.

COVER SCENE – It’s inside an Old West saloon! Angle at the swinging double-doors of the saloon. In the foreground, Reed (all stretched out), Johnny, unconscious, part of his body with bits of flame, and Sue (part of her body invisible) are all knocked out, on the floor. Busted tables, spilled drinks. It was quite a fight in here. The HAND AND GUN of a gunfighter are in extreme foreground. The hand is gloved so we can’t tell if it’s a guy or gal. Framed by the half-busted salloon doors, BEN GRIMM enters, angry. He’s got a Sheriff’s badge, a cowboy hat, big cowboy boots, and his usual blue FF trunks.

Materials Used:
11x17 Strathmore Bristol
graphite and mechanical pencil
digitally inked in Photoshop